Score: 8

"A lovely interactive story!"

submission: Harry Cadaver

date: March 26, 2006

This movie gives you an excellent experience of a movie from the '30. Seeing a Cadaver in the main role, is funny. Combine that with a world similiar to Alice in Wonderland and you've got a perfect formule!

The graphics were in some way basic, but they fitted right in and made it feel like it was an old cartoon from the '30.
The character designs + backgrouns are also unique in its kind. But that perhaps no-one used a cadaver before in a movie like this.

You've used the perfect sounds like when you go to another chapter of the story. Plus I liked the background music.

What made this movie unique to others is that it was very interactive for a movie. You need to pull before you'll see the animation and a text-bar shows you what's the story behind the animation.
Very creative and like I said before very '30.

There's not much else I could add. Overall I really like this one how it's been set-up and the interactivty. I really got the 'Alice in Wonderland'-experience!

I hope to see some more of your respected work in the future.

Score: 8

"Extremly interactive game!"

submission: stunt bike

date: December 14, 2005

It has been a while since I've seen game which as been this interactive. It was quite hilarious to see the dummy act like a total moron on his bike.

The graphics are always a crucial part on a submission and the graphics were excellent.
There are quite some other submission on Newgrounds with motors and bikes, but none of them was of this quality.

What mostly was good about this game was the ragdoll. Very good psyhics, resulting that there were a couple of nice falls. The way of playing also was good, you need to drag the arrow and based on the that, it moved. So pretty much everything could happen and that's why it was a good thing to add a ragdoll to this game.

I enjoyed this one; the music was good, good interface, sounds, graphics, art.
There might been some little errors with the ragdoll, but you can't fix that for 100%. It was good enough, thouh.

Score: 7

"Fine game"

submission: Hellbound

date: December 14, 2005

First off: this game reminds me of Icy Towers, although you need to get higher, instead of getting down.

When the game was loaded a very good designed menu appeared, which gave a good impression already. When I start playing the game the graphics were still good. They weren't that big, so you could see the next obstacles, which is good.
The style does remind me of a combination of Icy Towers and Mario. It was fun to see that there were obstacles like enemies and you could crush them. :)
That made the game a lot more interactive and a bit harder to play. The sounds remind me of Mario and aswell as the music, but it was good, because it fitted right in the game.

A nice thing if this little game was that the game became more interactive because of the enemies, you needed to avoid them or crush them, this added some more difficulty to the game - especially when it was speeding up.

Overall it's a nice little game, which has left a good impression on me. It even was helpful with the instructions and the training. Although the music did become annoying when you played it for a while...

Score: 9

"You keep amaze me!"

submission: Monster In The Mansion

date: July 20, 2005

Your toons keep amaze me. This time you've used a whole new animation style - which I really liked.

First the art, which I also found quite special this time. It was this kinda cartoony style thing. You could see that in the characyer's designs and also in the background. You've done a very good job on that one.

The whole story behind this movie I find original. A scientist creating a monster, that doesn't know why he's here.
The scientist gace the monster the impression it was created because he could create it and because he was just an experiment. Later on, he really cared about it. Heh, I find that rather funny.

Like I said about your animation style: it was really good. The backgrounds weren't animated but the characters were. And each time they didn't moved, they kept moving, which fitted with the none moving backgrounds.
And everything has been animated very well. Smooth and good tweens.

As all of your movies, the sound has been recorded very well. And the voices were very original. A very 'normal' voice for the monster and a really dr. voice for the scientist. Certainly made it complete.

Now, you've submitted again a very good submission to NG. Keep it going, because I'm gonna keep enjoying it. ;)

Score: 7

"JeremyLokken Style!"

submission: Little Inspiration

date: July 4, 2005

Your movies really become better lately - and I see you're submitting a lot more movies to the Flash portal aswell. Something that I think is great.

Your graphics are fitting in just fine. Allthough the animation is sometimes kinda standard, it's seriously good enough for the movies you're creating.
I really think you're doing a very good job on the sounds. Very good and very very clear.

Now the basic idea about this movie is very original. Everything seemed negative in the persons life, I was thinking he would take suicide, but the janitor was so kind to do it for him. Pitty he needed to kill the hot dog man. Haha.

Seriously Jeremy, your movies always make me laugh and I enjoy watching time each time again.

Keep coming with the good work! :)

Score: 8

"Looks really good"

submission: Tinman

date: March 19, 2005

Tinman looks really good. The art is awsome, the animation is smoothly and the story is pretty cool.

A robot that is trying to get emotions. Never done before, so that's why it makes this movie 'special'. The song fits right in, wich is also giving the movie a certain look. Wich is good.

Keep up with the good work.

Score: 7

"A decent tutorial. :)"

submission: Flash tutorial 2005

date: October 18, 2004

It was a good tutorial. The AS part is a bit to short. But it's good.

For the rest has everything been done before. But, still it's cool. :)

-Zendra

Score: 7

"Haha, that Synj!"

submission: Storybook 1: Synj

date: October 15, 2004

It's funny you've made a movie, when Synj was coming around. "I helped caary Synj." So stupid, so funny. :)

This is a nice movie, for sure. The voices where good. And the humor, was nice.

Nice one -Dustball-! ;)

-Zendra

Score: 7

"Lol. Strange, but cool..."

submission: Nonsense Ep.3

date: October 14, 2004

Something is not right. First you see: "I - Presents". And the preloader shows up. It would be better to first show people the preloader and then the intro.

But you have some strange sense of humor. It's funny, though. I like that. The graphics where awsome aswell. Allthough the sounds could be better.

For the rest it's a nice movie. 4 of 5.

-Zendra

Score: 6

"A decent movie"

submission: The Inside

date: October 14, 2004

I liked the scary voice. It was kinda creepy. ;)

But the graphics could be better. It looked liked it they where .gif's or something. I liked it. It was nice. But not the best...

-Zendra